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Angel Down -- JDA by ~Jomina:iconJomina:





Dust filled skies coat an October's dusk
A hazy orange moon rises to scare and fright
Withering cobs lay within forgotten husks
Harvest-time abandoned with the coming night

Withering trees outcast a taste of a world grown chill
The tumbled leaves of amber decay on the ground
Oppressive scents of the past on the wind not still
And upon it there begins a loud, keening sound

Darkness emerges fearlessly as the sun finally falls
And the shapes of a black force begins to take wing
Noble and pauper, together. clutching within their walls
As a many-voiced chorus can now be heard to sing

"The evil in your hearts lets us hold sway
We'll take you by night and feed in the day
Poor as a mouse, or wear a kings crown
For we are the lice within angel down"

Black wings beat lazily in the heights far above
The hell-spawn creatures come single or by two
Teeth, growing stained, bring an era without love
And with each new sunfall it is begun anew

Time may pass and the torment come to an end
Peace may come to the hearts of man once more
The destruction rebuilt and the wounds will mend
And hope for the future will once again soar

But all things will have their ebb and their flow
They are always watching, waiting to take wing
Hardened the heartbeats of man will again grow
And as their voices rise, together man will cling

"The evil in your hearts lets us hold sway
We'll take you by night and feed in the day
Poor as a mouse, or wear a kings crown
For we are the lice within angel down"
©2004-2009 ~Jomina
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Author's Comments

NOTE: This is a collaboration between dearheart and myself. The poem was written by us both.

The image... well.. this is my first digital painting. This took me a lonnnnnnnng while to do, and I can say for sure that it was HELL. But I am VERY proud of the results, and i hope that you enjoy it as much as I do.

Please go gentle on the image, remembering that it's a first try for me. Constructive crits most welcome, of course

Method : Mouse lol owies

Anyhow.. when she saw this image, Jolene found herself inspired to write something for it, and I loved what she came up with. But wasnt quite what I was looking to do for it. So I wrote one as well. And it still wasnt quite what I wanted. So I mixed and matched, and you see the results below :giggle:

Anyhow.. onward!

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:iconagehachou:
I love this the art and the writing so much talent between the two of you!!!
:iconorangebutt:
wonderful style and colors... love especially the little hear (perhaps just for me) in the left middle ... also the poem is fantastic and gives this piece a great deeper meaning atmosphere :+fav:

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I can still feel you, even so far away...
:iconprofesstional2b:
the pic reminds me of a demintor from Harry potter - prisoner of azkaben.

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:iconpeaceplacid:
very interesting, and extremely dark. a real work of art
:iconzalitak:
I'm not sure why you were worried about extra criticism on this one Ira. As you have probably noticed, I rarely comment unless I find a piece you have made interesting. This is one of those pieces. For a first time painting, I think you would have alot of people fooled into believing you have been doing it for some time now. Well done. :)

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There are painters who transform the sun to a yellow spot, but there are others who with the help of their art and their intelligence, transform a yellow spot into the sun ~ Pablo Picasso
:icondarthmarlan:
Very very nice, wonderful image and great words too. Fantastic.
:iconboycrazysk8r:
I love your picture and the poem! Very nice :clap:

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:pointandlaugh:---Willie saw some dynamite,:omfg: Couldn't
:iconanalyser:
the picture's very cool for a first timer! :O wish i could paint that..and the poem....awesome...:+favlove: you guys rock!:D

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:iconzaratuxly:
yeahhh good work in group
:iconthesquab:
Digital painting, ugh so hard to do, belioeve me I have tried! but you did a great job, it has such good detail, yet it has its simplistic moments that really draw your eyes to the right part of the piece.. Very good job, and the words help bring that emotion to life

Great work

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